Кто поможет с английским?СРОЧНО!

My own home it is my personal apartament/ I live in this part during a lot time/ In my opinion the adult must live in own home because it really important for us Own home it our independens at parent Personaly i think that every adult must live ourselves Really we must finish school,university and live in another part far away from parents I consider it is important steps in life every people It is so difficult but everybody needs in independence and happyness