Помогите, задали сочинение на английском!

Помогите, задали сочинение на английском!Я написала с горем пополам, но нужно,чтоб проверил ошибки грамотный человек,знающий английский язык. Пожалуйста, исправьте... Заранее спасибо)) All the people enjoy summer holidays very much. It is a great pleasure to have a rest after a whole year of hard study. People like to travel during their summer holidays. Some people go abroad to see new countries, some people prefer to go to the country-side to enjoy country-life far from noise and fuss of big cities. I like to have rest at the seaside best of all. The beach is a traditional summer destination for thousands of people. The wealth of thing to do include sunbathing. Summer holidays are wonderful. there are many long sunny days. There is no school. There are new friends and many interesting things to see and to do. There was nothing to do all day except lying in the sun and get a wonderful tan. So the bigger part of my summer vocations I spent at the books. Of course, it was not interesting, but I’m glad that I did it, Because I should hand over entrance examinations. It’s fun to have holidays, you can do whatever you like, you don’t have to get up too early, do your homework or think of troubles which occur very often at school. I like summer holidays because they are the longest ones. I played computer games and sat on the Internet, watched TV programms and films too. Also during summer vacations I have devoted a lot of time to trainings. To our city there came the highly skilled trainer on dances and I took from him lessons. I persistently was engaged and very strongly was tired, because I need to reach more high-class in dances. Each day was full of small joys. During the holidays we have an opportunity of enjoying the life and having rest. But I am happy to meet my friends and teachers in school.