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Проверьте по ангийскому правильность.My name is Olesya. To me fifteen years. I the student. I from Russia. I live in Moscow. My hobby: to listen to music, to walk with friends, to read books, to watch TV.My favourite music style are alternative.

I live with my family. There are free of us: Mum, Dad and me. My mum call Svetlana. It works as the manager. Its hobby cookery. My daddy call Gennady. It works as the mechanic. Its hobby fishing. My family very amicable. We like to spend together a free time.