Сочинение по английскому на тему Рождество проверьте на граммотность прошу!!!

Сочинение по английскому на тему Рождество проверьте на граммотность прошу!!!I think Christmas is very old tradition , but with it holiday people can earn money . Christmas is religious holiday . The wonderful food , music , songs, stories - all make Christmas the holiday of holidays . On Christmas day there are religious ceremonies at churches . Christmas is the most important festival of the tear . Most families decorate their houses with different things . Everything is bought . And many company have a lot money on this holiday . Everyone want to give presents for their relatives . Children believe in Santa Claus . They leave a long sock at the end of their beds . In this holiday people are very kindly , with smile on the face . I like Christmas because I can spend all day with my family . I know that my friends spends this holiday with each other , but I spend with my parents , and i am proud of it .