Добрый вечер. Помогите пожалуйста с сочинением на английском языке про NY от первого лица. Спасибо заранее 

I want to tell you about my adventure! There was excellent! At first I went to our hotel, it was on the city center. N.Y is the center of model business, there are many shops there. At firs I wet to the famous shops! I bought there many clothes. Then I went to the restaurant with my friends. It was tasty) After that we went to the famous museum, there were house of wax! It looks really) I like it very much)