Помогите пожалуйста составить рассказ на 80 слов , тема : The most exciting holiday of my life.

Everyone has his own great holiday, and I have too.  It was an excelent day! My family and I went to the zoo, we're looking at the animals, laughing and eating ice cream. I took a lot of photos there!  My mother knows a lot about animals, so she told me about tiger's habitats or what snakes like to eat. The most beautifull and funny animal there was a monkey. It has eaten all bananas, which we bought to the zoo. It was a great experience. And I hope, we'll go to the zoo one more time  in future. ( Пересчитай кол-во слов и лучше пропусти через word, могут быть грамматические ошибки, тк писала быстро)