Правильно ли я составила эссе по английскому? Homeless animals A lot of animal live on the streets. should I take home stray animals? On the one hand, adopt a homeless animals a lot of fun. taking an animal home ,I will helping...

Правильно ли я составила эссе по английскому? Homeless animals A lot of animal live on the streets. should I take home stray animals? On the one hand, adopt a homeless animals a lot of fun. taking an animal home ,I will helping him survive .If I take the animal home, he will be grateful to me. i will never be bored with pets. On the other hand, the homeless animal may be ill. To care he animals is very difficult .the animals needs constant supervision , often play with him. small animals can not be left home alone. if you do not know how to care for animals ,you can harm them. to sum up, you become responsible forever, for what you have tamed .take home stray homeless animals is very seriously. however I belive that animals not suffer.