One winter morning, I saw a short palm tree yellow bananas. On palm tree sat monkey who was chatting with a crocodile . I went to him and said the monkey I said hi and hello what is your name crocodile said I Genna and this lil...

Ну во -первых, a short palm tree with bananas . Вторе предл я бы вообще по-другому построила бы- a monkey was sitting on the palm tree and was chatting with a crocodile. Дальше вообще не понятно,но ,наверное ,лучше так- 3 предл i went up to the tree and said hello to the monkey. Then I asked what was the monkeys name. The crocodile answered that his name was Genna and the monkey's name was lily. I said that my name is Jill and that i was very glade to meet them. В Последнем предложении вообще не понятно,что вы пытались сказать.

1) В первом предложении one winter morning должен быть в конце предложения. 2) Не chatting, a speaking 3) Не said to monkey, a ask или talk to monkey 4) Не I said hi and hello, a I said: ,,Hi, what was your name?" 5) Crocodile said: ,, I was Genny and this was Lilly, i was glad to see you