Проверьте мой монолог по английскому, пожалуйста :3 1. My school is good, but far from ideal . 2 . I believe that in the future schools should strongly change. 3 . Firstly, for it will become more interesting to learn to pupils...

Проверьте мой монолог по английскому, пожалуйста :3 1. My school is good, but far from ideal . 2 . I believe that in the future schools should strongly change. 3 . Firstly, for it will become more interesting to learn to pupils,in school must appear scientific laboratories, equipped gym, swimming pool. 4 . Can will be better our classroom. 5 . Second, teachers should be more gracious and understanding. 6. Third, school canteen should be a great choice. 7. Fourth, must appear electronic diaries . 8. And it will be able to use phones and tablets . 9. Fifth, in the school of the future may change the schedule . 10 . It would be nice if the brake will be longer , and lessons will be later. 11. And that was a big change for lunch. 12. And also, I think all schools should have lockers. 13. Very difficult each time wearing to school all textbooks .