Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильно ли я написала сочинение по английскому на тему "М

Проверьте, пожалуйста, правильно ли я написала сочинение по английскому на тему "Мой любимый певец". Если есть какие-то ошибки, недочеты, укажите на них. Если все нормально, тоже напишите. Заранее спасибо One of my favorite singers is Loic Nottet. It is a young Belgian singer who was born in Courcelles on 10 April 1996. I learned about it thanks to the song contest "Eurovision" which was held in Vienna in 2015. On Eurovision he took 4th place with his song "Rhythm inside".From the first seconds I was hooked by his performance. Everything was perfect: amazing voice, the choreography, the song. Apart from singing he is also dancing. He was invited to participate in the French show "dancing with the stars" in September 2015. On January 24 there was held the final of the show, where he won by a huge margin, and has broken all records this show, while in France, he was little known. This once again proves that he is talented in all directions. I am very proud of my idol and really looking forward to the release of his album.