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This is Leo and he's from Paris. Last month Leo and his classmates went to Oxford on a school trip. They went by coach. It took eight hours to get to Oxford. Journey was long, but it was fun. Leo was sitting next to his best friend during trip. On their way friends were reading magazines and singing songs.The first thing we did was visiting the Ashmolean Museum and climbing Saint Mary's Tower. The Ashmolean Museum of art and archaeology was founded in 1683 and there we saw many interesting paintings. Saint Mary's Tower is very high. It has 127 steps. At the pick of the Tower is too scary and at the same time it was adorably.In the afternoon we had picnic in a park. There were many beautiful flowers in the park and fresh air made our lunch yummy.After lunch we went on a boat trip up the river. It was the best thing during our trip. I liked it the most of all.