Помогите , пожалуйста, с английским.Нужно написать письмо.

Hallo!Jane , I live in the flat.It has two bed rooms , living  room ,kitchen , bath room and  hall.My favourite room is  my bed room.I don't have to share my room with my sister. I can reed a book,watch a cartoons or films.,drowing or painting ,sing a song etc.I like my room it is very nice and comfortable.